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2016-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Here in Korea, it is raining so it is a little bit cold. These days, it is often that it is rainy. I don't like the rainy weather but it is good for crops. I just hope this weekend will be a sunny day so that I can go on a mountain again. I want to take advantage of this good weather to climb. The weather is very appropriate for us to go climbing until Jun. As you guess, the weather won't help us go climbing in summer. Even though the process of going up is still hard, I can't forget the satisfaction that I always feel on the top of the mountain. I think it proves that I am getting older. Hehehe! Climbing is considered as a popular sport for older generation. ^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

If only I had a chance to go to a mountain [without worrying about

my health condition], I would really like to go there

and feel the satisfaction that you have.

I really like to experience it as well.

See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Here in Korea, it is raining so it is a little bit cold. 

>> Correct
 These days, it is often that it is rainy. 

>> These days, it often rains.
 I don\'t like the rainy weather but it is good for crops.

>> Correct
 I just hope this weekend will be a sunny day so that I can go on a mountain again. 

>> I just hope this weekend will be a sunny day so that I can go to a mountain agai.
 I want to take advantage of this good weather to climb. 

>> Correct  
The weather is very appropriate for us to go climbing until Jun. 

>> The weather is very appropriate for us to go climbing until June.
 As you guess, the weather won\'t help us go climbing in summer. 

>> Correct  
 Even though the process of going up is still hard, I can\'t forget the satisfaction that I always feel on the top of the mountain. 

>> Correct  
 I think it proves that I am getting older. Hehehe! 

>> Correct  
 Climbing is considered as a popular sport for older generation. ^^;; 

>> Correct  
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow!

>> Correct  

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