Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
If only I had a chance to go to a mountain [without worrying about
my health condition], I would really like to go there
and feel the satisfaction that you have.
I really like to experience it as well.
See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Here in Korea, it is raining so it is a little bit cold.
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These days, it is often that it is rainy.
>> These days, it often rains.
I don\'t like the rainy weather but it is good for crops.
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I just hope this weekend will be a sunny day so that I can go on a mountain again.
>> I just hope this weekend will be a sunny day so that I can go to a mountain agai.
I want to take advantage of this good weather to climb.
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The weather is very appropriate for us to go climbing until Jun.
>> The weather is very appropriate for us to go climbing until June.
As you guess, the weather won\'t help us go climbing in summer.
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Even though the process of going up is still hard, I can\'t forget the satisfaction that I always feel on the top of the mountain.
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I think it proves that I am getting older. Hehehe!
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Climbing is considered as a popular sport for older generation. ^^;;
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
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