Composition

2016-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Good to know about your good news! ^^ Now, I am occupied with translation tasks so I lack time to make a composition. Please understand and see you tomorrow! ^^** That one is a big adjustment for her. Are they are going to Japan for good? Japanese people are thrifty. There are also some who are very stingy. They are more practical than Korean. He is very straightforward. You have to tell it to my face. I was really deceived by the lip-service of him.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
You are already rushing but still

your sentences are perfect!^^
Good luck in your translation tasks.

Don\'t forget to take break time.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Good to know about your good news! ^^

>> Correct
 Now, I am occupied with translation tasks so I lack time to make a composition.

>> Correct
 Please understand and see you tomorrow! ^^** 

>> Correct
 That one is a big adjustment for her.

>> Correct
 Are they are going to Japan for good? 

>> Correct
 Japanese people are thrifty.

>> Correct
 There are also some who are very stingy.

>> Correct
 They are more practical than Korean. 

>> Correct
 He is very straightforward.

>> Correct
 You have to tell it to my face.

>> Correct
 I was really deceived by the lip-service of him.

>> Correct

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