Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!^^
You are indeed a very keen woman!^^
This topic needs to be discussed more in class.
So, I will give you time to wonder first about my opinion
then I will tell you my real perspective in class.
See you then!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I heard the TV news that Rodrigo Duterte has been elected President there.
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Many people said that his political move is similar with the candidate Donald Trump in the USA.
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I somehow can\'t understand why these kinds of people became popular nowadays.
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I don\'t mean to criticize them but I am just wondering why they are sought after even if their attitudes are impolite and rude.
>> I don\'t mean to criticize them but I am just wondering why they are praised after even if their attitudes are impolite and rude.
Are the citizens thirsty for the perfect change in the society there?
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Do you think he could totally change your country to the right way?
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I am not exactly aware of the political status there but I am curious how you think about this result.
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I just guess his presidential election pledge motivated people to elect him.
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If my teacher was not Filipino, I wouldn\'t be interested in this news. ^^
>> If my teacher was not a Filipino, I wouldn\'t be interested in this news. ^^
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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