Composition

2016-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I heard the TV news that Rodrigo Duterte has been elected President there. Many people said that his political move is similar with the candidate Donald Trump in the USA. I somehow can't understand why these kinds of people became popular nowadays. I don't mean to criticize them but I am just wondering why they are sought after even if their attitudes are impolite and rude. Are the citizens thirsty for the perfect change in the society there? Do you think he could totally change your country to the right way? I am not exactly aware of the political status there but I am curious how you think about this result. I just guess his presidential election pledge motivated people to elect him. If my teacher was not Filipino, I wouldn't be interested in this news. ^^ That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!^^

You are indeed a very keen woman!^^

This topic needs to be discussed more in class.

So, I will give you time to wonder first about my opinion

then I will tell you my real perspective in class.

See you then!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I heard the TV news that Rodrigo Duterte has been elected President there.

>> Correct
 Many people said that his political move is similar with the candidate Donald Trump in the USA.

>> Correct
 I somehow can\'t understand why these kinds of people became popular nowadays. 

>> Correct
 I don\'t mean to criticize them but I am just wondering why they are sought after even if their attitudes are impolite and rude. 

>> I don\'t mean to criticize them but I am just wondering why they are praised after even if their attitudes are impolite and rude. 
 Are the citizens thirsty for the perfect change in the society there? 

>> Correct
 Do you think he could totally change your country to the right way? 

>> Correct
 I am not exactly aware of the political status there but I am curious how you think about this result. 

>> Correct
 I just guess his presidential election pledge motivated people to elect him. 

>> Correct
 If my teacher was not Filipino, I wouldn\'t be interested in this news. ^^ 

>>  If my teacher was not a Filipino, I wouldn\'t be interested in this news. ^^ 
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct 

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