Composition

2016-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! A happy Friday to you! Thanks for explaining about your political situation and making me understand. I also realized that you have the same opinion with us when it comes to the President in the USA. Our subject today was a little bit sensitive but it was nice to know the similarity with what you are thinking. Here in Korea, a lot of people also don't want him to win this election. They are worried if this situation will really happen. It seems like we hurt our pride but we can't deny the truth that the USA is very influential in the world. Well, We'll just have to wait and see the result. ^^;; That is all for today and see next Monday! Bye~^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^
I hope I was able to make you understand our political

situation here in the Philippines.

Let\'s have more of these topics in our class.

See you then on Monday!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 A happy Friday to you!

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 Thanks for explaining about your political situation and making me understand.

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 I also realized that you have the same opinion with us when it comes to the President in the USA. 

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Our subject today was a little bit sensitive but it was nice to know the similarity with what you are thinking. 

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Here in Korea, a lot of people also don\'t want him to win this election. 

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 They are worried if this situation will really happen.

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 It seems like we hurt our pride but we can\'t deny the truth that the USA is very influential in the world. 

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 Well, We\'ll just have to wait and see the result. ^^;; 

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 That is all for today and see next Monday!

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 Bye~^^**

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