Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
I hope I was able to make you understand our political
situation here in the Philippines.
Let\'s have more of these topics in our class.
See you then on Monday!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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A happy Friday to you!
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Thanks for explaining about your political situation and making me understand.
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I also realized that you have the same opinion with us when it comes to the President in the USA.
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Our subject today was a little bit sensitive but it was nice to know the similarity with what you are thinking.
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Here in Korea, a lot of people also don\'t want him to win this election.
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They are worried if this situation will really happen.
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It seems like we hurt our pride but we can\'t deny the truth that the USA is very influential in the world.
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Well, We\'ll just have to wait and see the result. ^^;;
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That is all for today and see next Monday!
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Bye~^^**
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