Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
It seems like you spent the last weekend very entertainingly.
I think it is the first time for you to share your story of the weekend willingly and it sounded really good.
Staying at home is also good way to take a rest but I prefer to go out and do special activities.
If I don't do anything and just stay at home, I would feel more tired.
Even if reaching the top of the mountain sounds like more tiring, it is a kind of a stress reviler for me.
I can't forget the taste of eating Korean Instant Cup Noddles with a can of beer at the top of the mountain.
The taste is really heavenly. ^^
That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I think you were not able to finish your composition.
Now I am not sure of what else you want to say.
kkk
See you then!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> Correct
It seems like you spent the last weekend very entertainingly.
>> Correct
I think it is the first time for you to share your story of the weekend and it sounded really good.
>> Correct
Staying at home is also good way to take a rest but I prefer to go out and do special activities.
>> Staying at home is also a good way to take a rest but I prefer to go out and do special activities.
If I
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