Composition

I knew it!^^
It was a mistake when I read your composition this morning.
I was really wondering why and expected that you will submit another one

afterwards.

Thank you for sharing your experience, [이름]!^^
See you tomorrow!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

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 It is what I wanted to submit this morning. 

>> This is what I wanted to submit this morning.
 I guess when I was revising my composition, you might have been checking what I wrote at the same time. 

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 See you tomorrow! 

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 It seems like you spent the last weekend very entertainingly. 

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 I think it is the first time for you to share your story of the weekend willingly and it sounded really good. 

>> I think it is the first time for you to share your story about your weekend willingly and it sounded really good.
 Staying at home is also good way to take a rest but I prefer to go out and do special activities. 

>> Staying at home is also a good way to take a rest but I prefer to go out and do special activities.
 If I don\'t do anything and just stay at home, I would feel more tired. 

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 Even if reaching the top of the mountain sounds like more tiring, it is a kind of a stress reviler for me. 

>> Even if reaching the top of the mountain sounds like more tiring, it is a kind of a stress reliever for me. 
 I can\'t forget the taste of eating Korean Instant Cup Noddles with a can of beer at the top of the mountain.

>>  I can\'t forget the taste of eating Korean Instant Cup Noodles with a can of beer at the top of the mountain.
 The taste is really heavenly. ^^

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 That is all for today and see you tomorrow!

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