Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I envy the weather that you have there.
Here in Baguio city, the weather is unpredictable again.
It may rain in the afternoon but then suddenly, the sun comes out
again! This is the weather that I hate the most.
See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> Correct
These days, the weather is really wonderful so I somehow don\'t feel like working in the office. Hehehe ^^:;
>> Correct
At this time of the year, it is the best season for us to do outdoor activities.
>> Correct
It is not only sunny , but the temperature is also suitable to do everything.
>> Correct
At this moment, I wish I could spread a mat in the shade at the riverside and lie down.
>> Correct
Anyway, please help me check what I wrote down.
>> Correct
See you tomorrow!
>> Correct
-Everybody feels that way.
>> Correct
-The time is very flexible.
-There are few reasons why they want to study English.
>> Correct
-This custom was just passed down from generation to generation.
>> Correct
-He was born when his mother was at the age of 16.
>> Correct
-She gave birth to me when she was 34.
>> Correct
-There are some big name people who consult the help of the fortune teller.
>> There are some people with big names who consult help of the fortune teller.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.