Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!^^
Our conversation was indeed informative.
However, like what you said, our time was too short
for me to get to know more about this fruit.
However, if I had a chance, I would like to try to taste
every kind of it.^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Today, we talked about jujube and our time was too short to talk more about its information.
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It is not common for young generation to eat this jujube even if it has a lot of benefits for people.
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Nowadays, it is almost considered as an old food and only our older generation enjoys having it.
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We can have it in many forms.
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First, we can have it in a form of real fruit.
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However, it tastes a little bit bitter and bland so it is not attractive.
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That is why we usually make it dry to make it more rich in flavor.
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Second, we can have it after boiling.
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It is the most convenient way for us to have it healthily in this busy society.
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We can find instant tea bags for sale in markets.
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Even if it is artificial, it is still good rather than drinking other beverages.
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Finally, it is usually used when we hold a ancestral ceremony.
>>Finally, it is usually used when we hold an ancestral ceremony.
When we prepare foods for ancestral rites table, it is indispensable.
>>When we prepare foods for the table during the ancestral rites, it is indispensable.
I have no idea why it is indispensable but I think it contains some auspicious meanings.
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Anyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow!
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