Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there again, [이름]!^^
I know the feeling that you had a limitation for you to
write your thoughts.
Luckily, there is no limit on how many compositions
you would like to do in a day. hehe
Have a great day ahead!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
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Because my composition should be limited to 1000 words so I am going to use another page to write sentences that I\'d like to ask you to check.
>> Because my composition should be limited to 1000 words, I am going to use another page to write sentences that I\'d like to ask you to check.
It can have the combination of the taste.
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It has a lot of benefits for women.
>> Correct
It has a good function for blood circulation.
>> Correct
It has a function like detoxification.
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We can get some water from boiling some dried jujube.
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It won\'t be spoiled (rotten) for a few days.
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To preserve its quality for a long time, we usually dry it.
>> Correct
See you tomorrow!
>> Correct
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