Composition

2016-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher, Because my composition should be limited to 1000 words so I am going to use another page to write sentences that I'd like to ask you to check. It can have the combination of the taste. It has a lot of benefits for women. It has a good function for blood circulation. It has a function like detoxification. We can get some water from boiling some dried jujube. It won't be spoiled (rotten) for a few days. To preserve its quality for a long time, we usually dry it. See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hello there again, [이름]!^^
I know the feeling that you had a limitation for you to

write your thoughts.

Luckily, there is no limit on how many compositions

you would like to do in a day. hehe

Have a great day ahead!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher, 

>> Correct
 Because my composition should be limited to 1000 words so I am going to use another page to write sentences that I\'d like to ask you to check. 

>>  Because my composition should be limited to 1000 words, I am going to use another page to write sentences that I\'d like to ask you to check. 
 It can have the combination of the taste.

>> Correct
 It has a lot of benefits for women. 

>> Correct
 It has a good function for blood circulation. 

>> Correct
 It has a function like detoxification.

>> Correct
 We can get some water from boiling some dried jujube. 

>> Correct
 It won\'t be spoiled (rotten) for a few days. 

>> Correct
 To preserve its quality for a long time, we usually dry it.  
>> Correct
 See you tomorrow!

>> Correct

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