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Hi, [이름]!

There are things that we can\'t stop from doing and

ageing is one of them.

The only thing that we have to do is not to fight

it but to live with it.

Having a good lifestyle prevents us from making

our numbers go backwards!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 Today, we talked about our fat and I think it is the most frequent topic that girls talk about. 

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 When it comes to the weight, we can\'t avoid the pressure of keeping our body well-balanced. 

>> When it comes to weight, we can\'t avoid the pressure of keeping our body well-balanced.
 In our current society, there are a lot of temptations that make our body get fat.

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 Because of the heavenly taste, we always lose our self-control in eating foods. 

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 We can call it \'addiction\' and sweet and fatty foods are considered as the most harmful factor. 

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 Just like what you said during our class, losing our weight is not only for our appearance looking good but it is also related to our body condition. 

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As we are getting older, our metabolism is also getting slower by the loss of muscles.

>> As we get older, our metabolism also gets slower because of the loss of muscles.
 I also feel that the speed of ageing exceeds my effort that I fight against the ageing. 

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It is really sad but we can\'t avoid this situation happening.

>> It is really sad but we can\'t avoid this situation from happening.
 Somehow, I feel sad to see me getting older. ^^;;

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 Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^

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