Composition

Hi there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing the situation you have there in Korea.

One thing that I would like you to keep in mind

is stay healthy. With the weather we are currently experiencing,

our immunity might be prone to diseases.

Take care~
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 You told me that the weather has been colder there because of the rain.

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 On the other hand, it is getting hotter here in Korea. 

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 Yesterday, I didn\'t get a sweet sleep because of the hot weather so I am a little bit sleepy now. 

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 I can say that it is the abnormal whether so I am worried about the summer weather. 

>> I can say that it is the abnormal weather so I am worried about the weather in summer.
 As I heard, the worst heat will come here this summer and the abnormal symptom has happened in the world. 

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 The suitable temperature in this season should be about 25 degrees Celsius but nowadays, we are experiencing 33 degrees Celsius so it makes people feel exhausted outside.

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 Fortunately, there is good news that it will be raining tomorrow and it will cool down the heat. 

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 I am strong to endure the heat but this kind of unusual situation is unwelcome. 

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 That is all for today and please help me correct these sentences below. 

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-I wasn\'t able to tie my hair up. 

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 -It is super duper hot.

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 -Descendants of the Sun would make me watch everything in one sitting. 

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 -He prohibits me from watching it.

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