Composition

2016-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Before I set off to the client office, I still have some time to make a composition luckily. ^^ Today, we talked about a sweet potato. You sent me a few pictures and it made my mouth watering. Even if I ate some steamed sweet potato before taking our class, I really wanted to taste the sweet potato in your country. I think the taste and the variety of yours and ours might be not the same. Here in Korea, we have three kinds of sweet potatoes. These are called 'chestnut sweet potato, pumpkin sweet potato and water sweet potato'. The pumpkin sweet potato is the sweetest one and it has yellow color. Because of its pure sweet taste, we usually steam or bake it and the recipe of baking makes the sweet potato more rich in flavor. Apart from the delicious taste, it can help us defecate well so if we suffer from constipation, eating it is really helpful. That is all for today and I am going to leave my place to visit my client right now. See you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

You were not the only one who had a watery mouth.

I also had and I think mine was greater because I hadn\'t eaten

my breakfast yet!kkkk

When I have sweet potato, I go to the toilet many times

and that proves your opinion more.^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Before I set off to the client office, I still have some time to make a composition luckily. ^^

>> Correct
 Today, we talked about a sweet potato. 

>> Today, we talked about sweet potatoes.
 You sent me a few pictures and it made my mouth watering. 

>> Correct
 Even if I ate some steamed sweet potato before taking our class, I really wanted to taste the sweet potato in your country. 

>> Correct
 I think the taste and the variety of yours and ours might be not the same. 

>> Correct
 Here in Korea, we have three kinds of sweet potatoes.

>> Correct
 These are called \'chestnut sweet potato, pumpkin sweet potato and water sweet potato\'. 

>> Correct
 The pumpkin sweet potato is the sweetest one and it has yellow color. 

>> Correct
 Because of its pure sweet taste, we usually steam or bake it and the recipe of baking makes the sweet potato more rich in flavor. 

>>  Because of its pure sweet taste, we usually steam or bake it and the recipe for baking makes the sweet potato richer in flavor. 
 Apart from the delicious taste, it can help us defecate well so if we suffer from constipation, eating it is really helpful. 

>> Correct
 That is all for today and I am going to leave my place to visit my client right now. 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct

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