Composition

2016-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! Please help me correct these sentences what I wrote below. You already left the office, didn't you? Take care of your body in this cold weather there. ^^ See you tomorrow! -How many glasses of water do you usually have in your entire shift? -What are you up to today? -I would not like to get anything any more. -The sugar will melt and stick with the sweet potato. -Peel the skin off and dip in sugar. -Some people are very indigent. -Is the sweet potato hard? -Some people recycle the skin after peeling. -Chop it in very small pieces and put some flour and then, they make it as a patty. -Do you usually not use agricultural chemicals on bananas?

강사 첨삭

[이름], it\'s my favorite time of the week!^^
Thank you so much for always been faithful

in having your grammar checked.
Keep on doing it and you are improving a lot^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Please help me correct these sentences what I wrote below. 

>> Please help me correct these sentences that I wrote below.
 You already left the office, didn\'t you? 

>> Correct
 Take care of your body in this cold weather there. ^^

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! 

>> Correct
 -How many glasses of water do you usually have in your entire shift? 

>> Correct
 -What are you up to today?

>> Correct
 -I would not like to get anything any more. 

>> Correct
 -The sugar will melt and stick with the sweet potato. 

>> Correct
 -Peel the skin off and dip in sugar. 

>> Peel the skin off and dip it in sugar.
 -Some people are very indigent. 

>> Correct
 -Is the sweet potato hard?

>> Correct
 -Some people recycle the skin after peeling. 

>> Correct
 -Chop it in very small pieces and put some flour and then, they make it as a patty. 

>> Correct
 -Do you usually not use agricultural chemicals on bananas?

>> Correct

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