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2016-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! There are only a few days left before the end of this month. Just like what you said, time really flies rapidly. Every minute and second is precious but I don't think I am using my time productively. When it comes to English, in comparison to the beginning of the day when I started to study, I seem to have lost my passion. In order to keep doing something, motivating is the most important factor for us to achieve the goal. Well, I need to find stronger motivation to make my life happier and more complete. It is a kind of self-reflection, not negativity. ^^;; Anyway, please help me correct these sentences below. See you tomorrow! ^^ -This pair of shoes is suitable for him. -Maybe, I just keep myself busy or take a nap. -What was your idea when he bought another pair of shoes with the different color for himself. -Their skin color really fits it. -Maybe, because the brown color is more manly. -How do you spell it? / How is it spelled? -It will prevent us from falling.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!^^
I understand what you want to say.

One thing is for sure. I will help you to motivate yourself

when it comes to studying English.

I will be a better teacher so that you would find challenge whenever

you study with me!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 There are only a few days left before the end of this month. 

>> Correct
 Just like what you said, time really flies rapidly. 

>> Correct
 Every minute and second is precious but I don\'t think I am using my time productively. 

>> Correct
 When it comes to English, in comparison to the beginning of the day when I started to study, I seem to have lost my passion.

>> Correct
 In order to keep doing something, motivating is the most important factor for us to achieve the goal.

>> Correct
 Well, I need to find stronger motivation to make my life happier and more complete. 

>> Correct
 It is a kind of self-reflection, not negativity. ^^;; 

>> Correct
 Anyway, please help me correct these sentences below. 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct
 -This pair of shoes is suitable for him. 

>> Correct
 -Maybe, I just keep myself busy or take a nap. 

>> Correct
 -What was your idea when he bought another pair of shoes with the different color for himself. 

>> What was your idea when he bought another pair of shoes with a different color for himself?
 -Their skin color really fits it. 

>> Correct
 -Maybe, because the brown color is more manly.

>> Correct
 -How do you spell it? / How is it spelled? 

>> Correct
 -It will prevent us from falling.

>> Correct

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