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2016-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! I have a question about the expression that we talked in our class. I said 'He had no confidence.' but you corrected it to 'He didn't have confidence'. Is the one that I expressed wrong? I am just confused about this so I'd like you to explain it for me. By the way, I heard the news yesterday that bananas will be extinct in 5~10 years because of the Panama Disease. The problem there is that we don't have appropriate measures to cure this disease. This infectious disease is usually spread by people so even if this disease has only happened to Southeast Asia for now, we can't prevent this disease from being spread to other countries. Because of this serious situation, people call it 'Bananageddon'. This word is a combination of Armageddon and banana and it contains the meaning of The final war. It shows how serious this situation is. For me, bananas are one of wonderful substitutes for breakfast. If the extinction of bananas really happened in the future, I would feel sad and frustrated. ㅠㅠ Anyway, today is wonderful Friday! Let's not think of a bad thing. Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^ -I am panicky. -Is there something bothering you? -You don't have any attention to open it. -He confessed his feelings to me early. -It was just before we got together. -You would just rather say 'just before'. -They don't really know how to court girls. -How was he split up with her? -The time he confessed to you was that he already broke up with her.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^
First of all, I am sorry about the inquiry.

It was my mistake to hear a wrong sentence

so I stand corrected.

Second, I haven\'t heard about that news yet.

I would be sad as well!!!! waaahhhh

Let\'s talk about this on Monday.

Have a great weekend~
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I have a question about the expression that we talked in our class. 

>> I have a question about an expression we used in our class.
 I said \'He had no confidence.\' but you corrected it to \'He didn\'t have confidence\'.

>> Correct [It\'s is correct however, I apologize because I heard \"He have no confidence\".]
 Is the one that I expressed wrong? 

>> Correct 
I am just confused about this so I\'d like you to explain it for me.

>> Correct
 By the way, I heard the news yesterday that bananas will be extinct in 5~10 years because of the Panama Disease. 

>> Correct
 The problem there is that we don\'t have appropriate measures to cure this disease. 

>> Correct
 This infectious disease is usually spread by people so even if this disease has only happened to Southeast Asia for now, we can\'t prevent this disease from being spread to other countries. 

>> Correct
 Because of this serious situation, people call it \'Bananageddon\'. 

>> Correct
 This word is a combination of Armageddon and banana and it contains the meaning of The final war. 

>> Correct
 It shows how serious this situation is. 

>> Correct
 For me, bananas are one of wonderful substitutes for breakfast. 

>> For me. bananas are one of the wonderful substitutes for breakfast.
 If the extinction of bananas really happened in the future, I would feel sad and frustrated. ㅠㅠ

>> Correct
Anyway, today is wonderful Friday! 

>> Anyway, today is a wonderful today!
 Let\'s not think of a bad thing. 

>> Correct
 Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^

>> Correct

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