Composition

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~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher,
>> Correct
I need to know if these sentences are correct. 

>> Correct
 I wrote these on my composition page just before but maybe, you didn\'t find them so I am going to use another page to ask you to check them. 

>> Correct
 -I am panicky. 

>> I am panicking.
 -Is there something bothering you? 

>> Correct
 -You don\'t have any attention to open it. 

>> You don\'t pay attention to open it. 
 -He confessed his feelings to me early.

>> Correct 
-It was just before we got together.

>> Correct 
 -You would just rather say \'just before\'.

>> Correct 
 -They don\'t really know how to court girls. 

>> Correct 
 -How did he split up with her? 

>> Correct 
 -The time he confessed to you was that he already broke up with her.
>> The time he confessed to you was the time he already broke up with her.
Thanks for your correction in advance. ^^

>> Correct