Composition

Hello, [이름]!^^

There were few mistakes that I corrected.

If you have questions about them, ask me in class!^^

By the way, I think I will follow your recommendation

and look for an active boyfriend. kkk

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 First of all, thanks for extending our class. 

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 I still don\'t know the reason why the sound system didn\'t work at that time. 

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 From now on, I will check my Skype system before our class starts so that nothing can disturb our talks. 

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 By the way, I already told you about the mountaineering story that I did yesterday. 

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 The ridge shoes that my boyfriend bought was really efficient in climbing rocks. 

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 If I walked along the normal path to reach the top of the mountain, it would take me about 2 hours.

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 However, this time, I climbed rocks so it took me only one hour and twenty to reach the top.

>> However, this time, I climbed rocks so it took me only one hour and twenty  minutes to reach the top.
 Of course, when I went down the mountain, I chose a gentle slope course.

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After doing this activity, we usually eat some high calorie foods. 

>> After doing this activity, we usually eat some high caloric foods. 
 I think having this kind of time is one of the happiest moments in my life.

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 If you have a boyfriend in the future, I want to recommend it to you. ^^

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 Anyway, have a nice day and see you tomorrow!

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