Composition

Hello, [이름]!^^
I could imagine yourself as you typed

your \"???\"!^^ Kkkk

Were you really surprised?

Please check the correction I had put

in a few sentences.

Don\'t worry, they are not that major mistakes!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 Because of my busyness this morning, I haven\'t reviewed my class yet so I\'d like to write my opinion about the subject that you gave on the evaluation page.

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 Unexpectedly, May 31st is a memorial day for the internet construction here in Korea. 

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 Were you aware of this day???

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 I was amazed when I saw the composition subject that you gave. 

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 As far as I researched on the internet, the first day of the internet construction here was on May 31st 1982.

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 In honor of this day, for once,it is good for us to think about the importance of using the internet. 

>> To honor this day for once, it is good for us to think about the importance of using the internet.
 There are a lot of weaknesses and advantages when it comes to use the internet. 

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It depends on who uses and what purpose it is used for.

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 In my case, I am the one who enjoys benefits of using the internet and I haven\'t been affected by the disadvantages that we can normally guess yet. 

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 However, I am thinking that there is a possibility for me to become a victim of cyber space.

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 Anyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow!

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