Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Now I know the reason why you asked
the question before our class ended.
It doesn\'t only talk about that kind of
arranged meetings, my dear.
However, I couldn\'t deny that
I have the same idea. That kind of arranged
meeting is for shallow people who just wants to
find comfort.
See you~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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As an extension of our class, I thought the arranged meeting only indicates the intersexual meeting to look for a partner but now, I understood the correct meaning.
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When it comes to this kind of meeting, I don\'t usually join it.
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I think people who like to attend this kind of meeting have their special purpose.
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This kind of meeting usually tend to focus on getting benefits from having a new relationship.
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I am not saying that this purpose is totally wrong but I just think they don\'t have their purity and innocence that they had when they were in their school days.
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That is why I felt regretful that I attended this gathering and I was unable to find motivation to keep attending this meeting.
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As we get older, maybe, it is natural for us to lose our naivety.
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Somehow, I feel a little bit bitter about this kind of shallow relationship.
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I am being negative again. Hehehe!
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Anyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow!
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