Composition

2016-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! As an extension of our class, I thought the arranged meeting only indicates the intersexual meeting to look for a partner but now, I understood the correct meaning. When it comes to this kind of meeting, I don't usually join it. I think people who like to attend this kind of meeting have their special purpose. This kind of meeting usually tend to focus on getting benefits from having a new relationship. I am not saying that this purpose is totally wrong but I just think they don't have their purity and innocence that they had when they were in their school days. That is why I felt regretful that I attended this gathering and I was unable to find motivation to keep attending this meeting. As we get older, maybe, it is natural for us to lose our naivety. Somehow, I feel a little bit bitter about this kind of shallow relationship. I am being negative again. Hehehe! Anyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^

Now I know the reason why you asked

the question before our class ended.

It doesn\'t only talk about that kind of

arranged meetings, my dear.

However, I couldn\'t deny that

I have the same idea. That kind of arranged

meeting is for shallow people who just wants to

find comfort.

See you~
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 As an extension of our class, I thought the arranged meeting only indicates the intersexual meeting to look for a partner but now, I understood the correct meaning. 

>> Correct
 When it comes to this kind of meeting, I don\'t usually join it.

>> Correct
 I think people who like to attend this kind of meeting have their special purpose.

>> Correct
 This kind of meeting usually tend to focus on getting benefits from having a new relationship.

>> Correct
 I am not saying that this purpose is totally wrong but I just think they don\'t have their purity and innocence that they had when they were in their school days. 

>> Correct
 That is why I felt regretful that I attended this gathering and I was unable to find motivation to keep attending this meeting. 

>> Correct
 As we get older, maybe, it is natural for us to lose our naivety. 

>> Correct
 Somehow, I feel a little bit bitter about this kind of shallow relationship. 

>> Correct
 I am being negative again. Hehehe! 

>> Correct
 Anyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow!

>> Correct

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