Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
What happened to you?
It is a rare situation for you to be absent so I am worried about your situation.
I hope that your absence will not be related with a bad thing.
I am expecting to see you next Tuesday.
Have a great weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for your concern. I have a fever and I am feeling weak but I will be back on my feet soon. I will tell you more about my condition when I get back. Take care of yourself so that you will not get sick like me.
See you~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> correct!
What happened to you?
>>correct!
It is a rare situation for you to be absent so I am worried about your situation.
>> correct!
OR>> It is rare for you to be absent so I am worried about you.
I hope that your absence will not be related with a bad thing.
>>correct!
I am expecting to see you next Tuesday.
>>correct!
Have a great weekend!
>>correct!
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