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2016-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Nice to see you with a good condition again! I was really worried about you last Thursday because you are not a person who is absent without any reasons. Always take care of yourself well in order not to feel sick! ^^** By the way, this four days holiday seemed very short for me and I didn't want to go to work today. ^^;; I just opened my e-mail box and there are a lot of emails that I have to check within this day. I might have a difficult time to deal with these tasks. Wish me good luck! ^^ That is all for today and see you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much for the concern, [이름]!^^
I am really well now.

Don\'t you worry. I will be as strong as a cow!^^

kkk

Have a wonderful day!^^ I know you can

finish all your tasks.!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Nice to see you with a good condition again!

>> Correct
 I was really worried about you last Thursday because you are not a person who is absent without any reasons.

>> Correct [Oh yes, definitely.]
 Always take care of yourself well in order not to feel sick! ^^**

>> Correct 
By the way, this four days holiday seemed very short for me and I didn\'t want to go to work today. ^^;;

>> Correct
 I just opened my e-mail box and there are a lot of emails that I have to check within this day. 

>> Correct
 I might have a difficult time to deal with these tasks.

>> Correct
 Wish me good luck! ^^

>> Correct

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