Composition
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강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Bella,
Thank you so much for still sending some of your compositions.
You did a great job on writing a composition, keep up the good work!^^
Hoping to talk to you again soon..
T.Camille
I'm so sorry about remind again.
>>Im so sorry to remind you again.
I know that you are so busy and there are many thing to confirm.
>>I know that you are so busy and that you have many things to confirm.
But we need data of "Goods In Transit" untill tomorrow early in the morning.
>>correct!
So, I would like to ask that upload data until today.
>>So I would like to ask you to upload the data until today.
Thank you so much for your help.
>>correct!
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