Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for reminding me about the
topic we were supposed to talk about.
For answering, I appreciate it as well!^^
We can talk more about it in class then.
See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher!
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Good morning!
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This was our question that we talked about before finishing our class yesterday.
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:I am a foreigner and then I showed disrespect towards an old person in Korea, do you think I would be scolded?
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I think the old person would understand the foreigner\'s mistake because after all, the person is a foreigner who can\'t understand Korean\'s custom perfectly.
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On the other hand, if the old person still scolded to the foreigner, what the old person did would be considered to be wrong.
>> On the other hand, if the old person still scolded to the foreigner, what the old person did would be considered wrong.
Of course, it depends on people\'s personalities. ^^;;
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Sometimes, I am thinking that our custom that focuses on manners is uncomfortable and it makes a lot of misunderstanding between the old and young generation.
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This kind of situation is one of the factors in the generational conflict.
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This subject is somehow profound to talk. ^^;;
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
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Take care~^^**
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