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2016-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear Teacher! Good morning! This was our question that we talked about before finishing our class yesterday. :I am a foreigner and then I showed disrespect towards an old person in Korea, do you think I would be scolded? I think the old person would understand the foreigner's mistake because after all, the person is a foreigner who can't understand Korean's custom perfectly. On the other hand, if the old person still scolded to the foreigner, what the old person did would be considered to be wrong. Of course, it depends on people's personalities. ^^;; Sometimes, I am thinking that our custom that focuses on manners is uncomfortable and it makes a lot of misunderstanding between the old and young generation. This kind of situation is one of the factors in the generational conflict. This subject is somehow profound to talk. ^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow! Take care~^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for reminding me about the

topic we were supposed to talk about.

For answering, I appreciate it as well!^^
We can talk more about it in class then.

See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Good morning! 

>> Correct
 This was our question that we talked about before finishing our class yesterday. 

>> Correct
 :I am a foreigner and then I showed disrespect towards an old person in Korea, do you think I would be scolded? 

>> Correct
 I think the old person would understand the foreigner\'s mistake because after all, the person is a foreigner who can\'t understand Korean\'s custom perfectly. 

>> Correct
 On the other hand, if the old person still scolded to the foreigner, what the old person did would be considered to be wrong. 

>>  On the other hand, if the old person still scolded to the foreigner, what the old person did would be considered wrong. 
 Of course, it depends on people\'s personalities. ^^;; 

>> Correct
 Sometimes, I am thinking that our custom that focuses on manners is uncomfortable and it makes a lot of misunderstanding between the old and young generation. 

>> Correct
 This kind of situation is one of the factors in the generational conflict.

>> Correct
 This subject is somehow profound to talk. ^^;;

>> Correct
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! 

>> Correct
 Take care~^^**

>> Correct

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