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2016-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good afternoon, Teacher! Please check if what I understand is correct. There are a lot of men concentrating on caring about their appearances. -> We can see a lot of men who are concentrating on caring about their appearances. There are a lot of men to concentrate on. -> We have to concentrate on a lot of men. There are a lot of people waiting to see her. -> We can see a lot of people who are waiting to see her. There are still a lot of people to wait for. -> We still have to wait for a lot of people. Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^
I apologize if I checked your homework a bit late.

But I can say that it is really perfect!^^
Keep up the good work!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

>> Correct
Please check if what I understand is correct.

>> Correct
There are a lot of men concentrating on caring about their appearances.
-> We can see a lot of men who are concentrating on caring about their appearances.

>> Correct
There are a lot of men to concentrate on.
-> We have to concentrate on a lot of men.

>> Correct
There are a lot of people waiting to see her.
-> We can see a lot of people who are waiting to see her.

>> Correct
There are still a lot of people to wait for.
-> We still have to wait for a lot of people.
>> Correct
Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

>> Correct

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