Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, philosopher [이름]!^^
kkk
I just want to say that there are some Mondays
that you become a philosopher. However,
you make me think about things in life.
You don\'t influence me, though, you mesmerize
me with your thoughts!^^
Thank you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
>> Correct
I got back to the office after having lunch.
>> Correct
Indeed, I have a lot of tasks that I have to finish within this day because our Chinese coworkers started work today.
>> Correct
Even if it is not a peak season these days, but there are a lot of tasks that piled up for two days.
>> Even if it is not a peak season these days, there are a lot of tasks that are piled up for two days.
Suddenly, I wish I could escape from this real world and travel around the world right now.
>> Correct
Actually, my boyfriend and I have discussed about this plan but we haven\'t put our thoughts into action.
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In this kind of repetitive lives, we have been unable to find any purposes to live.
>> In this kind of life which has repetitive routines, we have been unable to find any purposes to live.
Well, I think it seems like we still lack our courage for giving up material well-being.
>> Well, it seems like we still lack our courage for giving up material well-being.
On the other hand, I think that If I went out of this real world and were freed , would I want to go back to this realistic world in a few years again?
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Whatever I choose, the most important thing is not to be regretful for what I did.
>> Correct
I suddenly became philosophical.
>> Correct [Yeah, indeed!^^ kkk]
Don\'t be influenced by me and see you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct
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