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Thank you for the tips, [이름]!^^
I will definitely do the tips you gave me.

Don\'t you worry, we won\'t have presbyopia!^^

You have a point, prevention is better than cure.

See you again tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 Today, we suddenly talked about contact lenses and it was interesting. 

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 People nowadays can\'t avoid from using computers and smart phones for an entire day so it leads our eyes to feel painful. 

>> People nowadays can\'t avoid from using computers and smart phones for an entire day so it leads our eyes to feel pain. 
Since we can\'t help but accept this situation, we should think about good ways to keep our eyes in a good condition.

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 First, we should not look on something like computers, smart phones and books for a long time. 

>>  First, we should not look at something like computers, smart phones and books for a long time. 
 It will make our eyes feel tired and dry. 

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 Second, It is a good way for us to rub our hands and put them on our eyes for a while. 

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 This action will relive eye fatigue. 

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 If you have some time during your working hours, you can also try them. 

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 If I knew that these ways really work on eye health, I would have followed the remedies regularly so that I could keep my eyesight better.

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 It is too late to be regretful but it is time to take care of my eyes not to have presbyopia. Hehehe! 

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That is all for today and see you Tomorrow! ^^

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