Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]!^^
The desire to play a musical instrument will motivate you more
to learn.
It was my key that\'s why I know how to.
I am not an expert. I may not be good at it, too, but
I can say that I can complete one song. kkk
Hoping I can show you.
See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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It is raining here.
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The weather forecast said that the rainy season will be coming soon and it will be earlier than before.
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You are already experiencing the rainy season there, aren\'t you?
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This season is that I hate the most. ^^;;
>> This season is what I hate the most.
By the way, I was supersized that you can play the drum.
>> By the way, I was surprised that you can play drums.
I am sure that you look gorgeous when you play it.
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It seems like you have musical talent because you are already able to play three kinds of musical instruments.
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You don\'t need to be humble. ^^
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I also want to master to play the acoustic guitar like musicians.
>> I also want to master how to play the acoustic guitar like musicians do.
I have studied it on my own for one year but I still have some difficulties in fingering.
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The speed of changing the location of my fingers is still slow and the sound that I produce is not perfect yet.
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However, even though the music that I play with my guitar sounds like terrible, I am able to be fulfilled by my desire to learn itself.
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Someday, will I be able to be a guitarist? Hahaha!
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