Composition

2016-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! It is raining here. The weather forecast said that the rainy season will be coming soon and it will be earlier than before. You are already experiencing the rainy season there, aren't you? This season is that I hate the most. ^^;; By the way, I was supersized that you can play the drum. I am sure that you look gorgeous when you play it. It seems like you have musical talent because you are already able to play three kinds of musical instruments. You don't need to be humble. ^^ I also want to master to play the acoustic guitar like musicians. I have studied it on my own for one year but I still have some difficulties in fingering. The speed of changing the location of my fingers is still slow and the sound that I produce is not perfect yet. However, even though the music that I play with my guitar sounds like terrible, I am able to be fulfilled by my desire to learn itself. Someday, will I be able to be a guitarist? Hahaha!

강사 첨삭

Hey there, [이름]!^^

The desire to play a musical instrument will motivate you more

to learn.

It was my key that\'s why I know how to.

I am not an expert. I may not be good at it, too, but

I can say that I can complete one song. kkk

Hoping I can show you.

See  you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 It is raining here.

>> Correct
 The weather forecast said that the rainy season will be coming soon and it will be earlier than before. 

>> Correct 
You are already experiencing the rainy season there, aren\'t you? 

>> Correct 
 This season is that I hate the most. ^^;;

>> This season is what I hate the most.
 By the way, I was supersized that you can play the drum.  

>> By the way, I was surprised that you can play drums.
 I am sure that you look gorgeous when you play it. 

>> Correct 
 It seems like you have musical talent because you are already able to play three kinds of musical instruments. 

>> Correct 
 You don\'t need to be humble. ^^

>> Correct 
 I also want to master to play the acoustic guitar like musicians. 

>> I also want to master how to play the acoustic guitar like musicians do.
 I have studied it on my own for one year but I still have some difficulties in fingering.

>> Correct 
 The speed of changing the location of my fingers is still slow and the sound that I produce is not perfect yet. 

>> Correct 
 However, even though the music that I play with my guitar sounds like terrible, I am able to be fulfilled by my desire to learn itself. 

>> Correct 
 Someday, will I be able to be a guitarist? Hahaha!

>> Correct 

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