Composition

2016-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! Did you buy some breads after our class to alleviate your hunger? I think we would rather not talk about foods in our class. It seems like this topic always makes us feel down. I also usually have breakfast after finishing our class so I feel extremely hungry whenever we talk about delicious foods. Indeed, our urge to eat is really strong. Hahaha! I am one of the people who feel happy whenever eat something delicious and it is a kind of happiness in life. Eat to live or live to eat? I suddenly remembered this subject that we talked about in our last class. Someday, when we got full, let's talk about it to the fullest! Hahaha! See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^
At this moment, I am at home reading your

composition and laughing out loud.^^

We have to avoid talking about food in class.

It brings out the monster in me!^^

hahaha

See you tomorrow!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Did you buy some breads after our class to alleviate your hunger? 

>> Did you buy some bread after our class to alleviate your hunger?
 I think we would rather not talk about foods in our class. 

>> Correct
 It seems like this topic always makes us feel down. 

>> Correct
 I also usually have breakfast after finishing our class so I feel extremely hungry whenever we talk about delicious foods. 

>> Correct
 Indeed, our urge to eat is really strong. Hahaha!

>> Correct
 I am one of the people who feel happy whenever eat something delicious and it is a kind of happiness in life.

>> I am one of the people who feel happy whenever I eat something delicious and it is a kind of happiness in life.
 Eat to live or live to eat?

>> Correct
 I suddenly remembered this subject that we talked about in our last class. 

>> Correct
 Someday, when we got full, let\'s talk about it to the fullest! Hahaha! 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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