Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
At this moment, I am at home reading your
composition and laughing out loud.^^
We have to avoid talking about food in class.
It brings out the monster in me!^^
hahaha
See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
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Did you buy some breads after our class to alleviate your hunger?
>> Did you buy some bread after our class to alleviate your hunger?
I think we would rather not talk about foods in our class.
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It seems like this topic always makes us feel down.
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I also usually have breakfast after finishing our class so I feel extremely hungry whenever we talk about delicious foods.
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Indeed, our urge to eat is really strong. Hahaha!
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I am one of the people who feel happy whenever eat something delicious and it is a kind of happiness in life.
>> I am one of the people who feel happy whenever I eat something delicious and it is a kind of happiness in life.
Eat to live or live to eat?
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I suddenly remembered this subject that we talked about in our last class.
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Someday, when we got full, let\'s talk about it to the fullest! Hahaha!
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See you tomorrow! ^^**
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