Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for explaining more.
kkk
I wasn\'t able to get it right away a while ago.
Nevertheless, I understood it here more.
Have a great weekend!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> Correct
I\'d like to explain more about blueberries that are imported from Chile.
>> Correct
Sellers in Korea usually import them from Chile in bulk and they sell them on the internet.
>> Correct
Of course, the status of blueberries are freezing.
>> Of course, the status of the blueberries is freezing.
I have no idea how long it will take for the delivery from Chile to Korea but the delivery time from the seller in Korea to me is one day.
>> Correct
This is what I wanted to express to you in our class.
>> Correct
I am not saying that blueberries are delivered straight from Chile to me.
>> Correct [I\'m sorry, but I understood it this way!^^]
After reviewing our class, I realized that you misunderstood what I said because of my poor expression.
>> Correct [No, don\'t you worry.]
I am luck to be able to convey my thought clearly through this composition.
>> I am lucky to be able to convey my thoughts clearly through this composition. [Yes, thank you!]
That is all for today and have a wonderful weekend! ^^**
>> Correct
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