Composition

2016-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I'd like to explain more about blueberries that are imported from Chile. Sellers in Korea usually import them from Chile in bulk and they sell them on the internet. Of course, the status of blueberries are freezing. I have no idea how long it will take for the delivery from Chile to Korea but the delivery time from the seller in Korea to me is one day. This is what I wanted to express to you in our class. I am not saying that blueberries are delivered straight from Chile to me. After reviewing our class, I realized that you misunderstood what I said because of my poor expression. I am luck to be able to convey my thought clearly through this composition. That is all for today and have a wonderful weekend! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for explaining more.

kkk

I wasn\'t able to get it right away a while ago.

Nevertheless, I understood it here more.

Have a great weekend!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 I\'d like to explain more about blueberries that are imported from Chile.

>> Correct
 Sellers in Korea usually import them from Chile in bulk and they sell them on the internet.

>> Correct
 Of course, the status of blueberries are freezing. 

>> Of course, the status of the blueberries is freezing.
 I have no idea how long it will take for the delivery from Chile to Korea but the delivery time from the seller in Korea to me is one day. 

>> Correct 
This is what I wanted to express to you in our class. 

>> Correct
 I am not saying that blueberries are delivered straight from Chile to me. 

>> Correct [I\'m sorry, but I understood it this way!^^]
 After reviewing our class, I realized that you misunderstood what I said because of my poor expression. 

>> Correct [No, don\'t you worry.]
 I am luck to be able to convey my thought clearly through this composition.

>> I am lucky to be able to convey my thoughts clearly through this composition. [Yes, thank you!]
 That is all for today and have a wonderful weekend! ^^**

>> Correct

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