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2016-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! Did you totally recover from your fever? You might feel stuffy when you are unaware of the reason why you have fever. Fortunately, you used be a nurse so I think you can do a proper precaution when you have strange symptoms on your body. Especially in this kind of rainy season, you should take care more of your condition so that you can pass the summer healthily. Here in Korea, we are also experiencing the rainy season so the humidity as well as the temperature is very high. I can endure the hot temperature but the high humidity always makes me feel unpleasant. I didn't say, but I was suffering from diarrhea for a few days. I didn't have any spoiled foods so I have no idea why I had this symptom. I just guess this was from the hot temperature. Because of this, I wasn't able to drink cold beverages for a while. Now, I totally got rid of this bad condition so now, I am having a cup of iced coffee. That is the happiness that I can feel in my normal life. I am going to enjoy this time to the fullest before the ice melts. Take care of yourself and see you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^

Thank you for the concern you showed.

I am still experiencing problems with my tummy.

Being a nurse gives me paranoia and makes me

stubborn at the same time.

I would not like to go to the doctor because I want to

diagnose myself. kkk

See you later!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Did you totally recover from your fever? 

>> Correct
 You might feel stuffy when you are unaware of the reason why you have fever. 

>> Correct
 Fortunately, you used be a nurse so I think you can do a proper precaution when you have strange symptoms on your body. 

>> Correct
 Especially in this kind of rainy season, you should take care more of your condition so that you can pass the summer healthily. 

>> Especially in this kind of rainy season, you should take care more of your condition so that you can pass until summer healthily. 
 Here in Korea, we are also experiencing the rainy season so the humidity as well as the temperature is very high. 

>> Correct
 I can endure the hot temperature but the high humidity always makes me feel unpleasant. 

>> Correct
 I didn\'t say, but I was suffering from diarrhea for a few days. 

>> Correct
 I didn\'t have any spoiled foods so I have no idea why I had this symptom. 

>> Correct
 I just guess this was from the hot temperature. 

>> Correct
 Because of this, I wasn\'t able to drink cold beverages for a while. 

>> Correct
 Now, I totally got rid of this bad condition so now, I am having a cup of iced coffee. 

>> I totally got ride of this bad condition so now, I am having a cup of iced coffee.
 That is the happiness that I can feel in my normal life.

>> Correct
 I am going to enjoy this time to the fullest before the ice melts.

>> Correct
 Take care of yourself and see you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct

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