Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
This topic affects me a lot! TT.TT
I couldn\'t react much but maybe I was just
able to understand your point about the topic.
It would be better if we discuss this one
in our class.
See you then, [이름]!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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As an extension of our last class, I am going to explain more about our vacation.
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Our government legislates to protect employees from disadvantages in workplaces.
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We call it \'The Labor Standards Law\'.
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As you can guess, there are a lot of rules that employers must follow for employees.
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For example,the law specifies that working hours are within 40 hours for a week and employees have the right to require their annual and monthly leave.
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However, there are a lot of difficulties for many workers to assert their right in workplaces and they even have to study their boss\'s face to ask for a leave.
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Moreover, some small companies sometimes consider this leave as an unpaid leave.
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Even though many workers are still exposed to getting unfair treatments, practically, they are unable to bring a legal action because of the practical situation they are in.
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Just the thought of this real situation makes me feel bitter and frustrated.
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The subject today is a little bit dark. ^^;;
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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