Composition

Hello, [이름]!^^

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.

Music has been my life.

You know, one of my dreams was even to be a

music icon. kkk

I will tell you more when we talk again in class.

I have something for you, too tomorrow.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 Today, we talked about music. 

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 Knocking on Heaven\'s Door is one of my favorite songs and it always makes me sensitive.

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 This title is for a song as well as a movie. 

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I think you haven\'t seen this movie and I want to recommend it to you. 

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 I bet that you will be more emphatic with this music after watching this movie. 

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 By the way, when I was younger, I was really fond of listening to music. 

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 However, nowadays, I have no idea why I am not into music any more. 

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 I think I more prefer to listen to story telling like the radio. 

>> I think I prefer more to listen to story telling in the radio.
 Maybe, it is because I can feel that I am not alone and it seems like someone understands me when I listen to the radio. 

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 Sometimes, I have been even comforted by the radio and I can feel relaxed from stories that many listeners sent. 

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Someday, I want to send my own story to the radio and share it with other listeners.

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 Of course, it would be anonymous. ^^;;

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 Anyway, take some yogurt drinks to cure your tummy. ^^

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 See you tomorrow!

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