Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]!^^
Our time has always been wonderful
especially we talk about our dreams and
desires.
I hope that we can have more conversations
like this.
See you later!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
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First of all, I was thankful that you showed me some pictures that you played drums.
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Even though it was not a video I somehow could see your active and lively performance. Hahaha!
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Just like you, I also want to master a musical instrument perfectly but it seems like it takes a lot of time and needs efforts.
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I should have learned it when I was young.
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That is okay!
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I won\'t give up playing my guitar.
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Just like what you said in our class, I hope I also can send you some pictures of my back playing the guitar when my skill reaches a specific level. Hahaha!
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Maybe, in the future, we can also dream of playing your drum and my guitar together in the same place.
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However, I think playing a eltric guitar would be more suitable with your drum. ^^;;
>> However, I think playing an electric guitar would be more suitable than your drums.
I have one more homework. Hehehe!
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Anyway, take some rest so that you can get rid of your tiredness and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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