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2016-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! A Friday to you! Just this fact that it is Friday makes me feel happy and excited. I think all people not only me will be waiting for the weekend to come. More good news is that it won't be raining tomorrow here. Even if I have no idea of what I am going to do tomorrow, it seems like the weather condition will help me enjoy this weekend. If I don't have a special plan, maybe, I will go to the library to search for information about the Commonwealth of Australia. We are considering going there on a honeymoon in this December. The reason why we want to go there even though it is very far from here is because it is a rare chance for us to ask for a leave for a long time. This is only my opinion and maybe, my soon to be husband would have a different thought. I will share it more to you next Monday. Anyway, I hope that you can catch up on your sleep so that you can make your body recharged. See you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Your choice of place is unfamiliar for me.

Maybe, I will also make my research about it

so I can follow you when you

are going to talk about it.

Good luck!

See you on Monday!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 A Friday to you! 

>> Correct
 Just this fact that it is Friday makes me feel happy and excited. 

>> Correct
 I think all people not only me will be waiting for the weekend to come. 

>> Correct
 More good news is that it won\'t be raining tomorrow here. 

>> Correct
 Even if I have no idea of what I am going to do tomorrow, it seems like the weather condition will help me enjoy this weekend. 

>> Correct
 If I don\'t have a special plan, maybe, I will go to the library to search for information about the Commonwealth of Australia.

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 We are considering going there on a honeymoon in this December.

>> We are considering to go there for our honeymoon this December.
 The reason why we want to go there even though it is very far from here is because it is a rare chance for us to ask for a leave for a long time.

>> Correct
 This is only my opinion and maybe, my soon to be husband would have a different thought.

>> Correct
 I will share it more to you next Monday. 

>> Correct
 Anyway, I hope that you can catch up on your sleep so that you can make your body recharged.

>> Correct
 See you on Monday! ^^**

>> Correct

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