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2016-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! I am worried about your cold. Even if you only have a runny nose, you should not see it as a tiny symptom. Like what you said, have some vitamins and take enough rest so that you can cut it shorter. I hope you won't suffer from this bothersome situation long. Don't forget to drink a lot of water! ^^ See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for the concern, [이름]!

You have always been worried about me and

I can\'t thank you much for it.

As to show my appreciation, I will not let this

bothersome situation last long.

That way, I hope I can say thank you.

Take care, too!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!
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I am worried about your cold. 

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Even if you only have a runny nose, you should not see it as a tiny symptom.

>> Correct
 Like what you said, have some vitamins and take enough rest so that you can cut it shorter. 

>> Correct
 I hope you won\'t suffer from this bothersome situation long. 

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Don\'t forget to drink a lot of water! ^^

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 See you tomorrow!

>> Correct

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