Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I was really surprised with your message.
Maybe, we have to check other website and see
whether they have got other descriptions
about your zodiac sign.
See you again tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> Correct
I searched my zodiac sign and it is \'Scorpio\'.
>> Correct
Those are the description that is related to my personality and I commented on the keywords below.
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Scorpio Strength Keywords:
- Loyal: I am not
- Passionate: I am not
- Resourceful: I am not
- Observant: I am not
- Dynamic: I am not
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Scorpio Weakness Keywords:
- Jealous: I am not
- Obsessive: I am not
- Suspicious: I am not
- Manipulative: I am not
- Unyielding: I am
>> Correct
>> Only ONE correct???
It seems like the keywords don\'t match me at all. Hehehe!
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Here in Korea, we also see zodiac signs but it is only related to fortune for today.
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It is my first time to know that zodiac signs also can show people\'s personalities.
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According to the different costumes between here and there, the different way of interpretation seems to exist.
>> According to the different customs between here and there, the different way of interpretation seems to exist.
Well, today\'s topic was really interesting for me.
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Anyway, I am happy to see you feeling better and I hope your remedy really will totally work on your symptom.
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See you tomorrow! ^^*
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