Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Honestly, I felt down when we discussed about it.
It seemed like I was doomed!kk
However, your explanation was convincing so here I am,
doesn\'t care anymore about what my blood type nor my zodiac sign
is. Thank you!~~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher with A blood type and Pisces!
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Even though you already got the two things, you don\'t need to feel down.
>> Even though you already got two things, you don\'t need to feel down.
It is just a kind of prejudice and it should not stereotype people\'s trait.
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When it comes to the blood type, nowadays, people in only a few countries tend to believe in it.
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The representative countries are Korea and Japan.
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As far as I know, it came from Europe but they don\'t discuss about the connection between one\'s personality and the blood type any more.
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Some scholars said that the reason why this baseless logic is spread in Asia is because they tend to focus on a group, not an individual.
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That\'s why people started to categorize groups according to the blood type.
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I think it seems like it came from homogeneity and people tend to get comfort in this specific group.
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Like how we already felt in our class, as soon as we knew that we have the same blood type, we felt gladness at once.
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Anyway, I think it is enough to enjoy it only for entertainment. ^^
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Does your confidence go up again? Hehehe!
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See you tomorrow! ^^**
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