Composition

Good morning, Teacher! It is raining here in Seoul in contrast with there. The weather forecast predicted that we would experience heavy rains in this rainy season. However, we have not experienced heavy rain until now and we are in occasional rain showers today. Because of false reports provided from our weather agency, many people are venting some complaint out. The reason why people think of this situation negatively is because our weather agency has super computers which are very expensive but they haven't predicted the weather state accurately. I think that the machines are not worth the money. Anyway, I just hope that this rainy season will finish in a very short time. I'd rather have the super duper hot weather than the humid weather. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^** P.S.: Would you please change your headphone to the previous branded one? You voice doesn't sound loudly.

Hi, [이름]! First of all, thank you for saying something about my headphone. I had it changed as soon as I saw your composition. However, why didn\'t you tell me so in class?Anyhow, it will be better tomorrow. Along with your shower rains, keep yourself well-conditioned since a sudden change in your weather type can cause illnesses like common cold and cough. See you tomorrow. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectIt is raining here in Seoul in contrast with there. >> CorrectThe weather forecast predicted that we would experience heavy rains in this rainy season. >> CorrectHowever, we have not experienced heavy rain until now and we are in occasional rain showers today. >> CorrectBecause of false reports provided from our weather agency, many people are venting some complaint out. >> because of the false reports provided by out weather agency, many poeople are venting their complaint out. The reason why people think of this situation negatively is because our weather agency has super computers which are very expensive but they haven\'t predicted the weather state accurately. >> CorrectI think that the machines are not worth the money. >> CorrectAnyway, I just hope that this rainy season will finish in a very short time. >> CorrectI\'d rather have the super duper hot weather than the humid weather. >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**>> CorrectP.S.: Would you please change your headphone to the previous branded one? >> CorrectYou voice doesn\'t sound loudly. >> Your voice isn\'t loud.