Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Very well said, [이름]!^^
All I can say is the advice was
very intelligible!
I hope you can share this thought to anybody.
Thanks for telling me!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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It is very humid here so I feel down even if today is a wonderful Friday.
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It is not raining but there will be rain in the afternoon.
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I am worried about my laundry that I have to do on weekend.
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According to the weather forecast, this rain will last until next Monday so this humid weather would hinder my laundry from being dried.
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In this situation, using newspaper and fan is a good way to make the laundry dried fast.
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This way is not as good as Mr.Sun helps us dry the laundry but it can be considered as a good alternative. ^^
>> This way is not as good as Mr. [Name] helping us dry the laundry but it can be considered as a good alternative. (I\'m doing this method, too!)
By the way, when it comes to the last question in our book, I\'d like to answer you below.
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As long as you can find something that you really like and want, you will get a good result someday.
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In this process, you might encounter difficulties and frustration but it could become precious memories in the future after achieving what you desired.
>> In this process, you might encounter difficulties and frustration but they could become precious memories in the future after achieving what you desired.
I am unqualified to say this but I am also always reminding this good learn to myself.
>> I am unqualified to say this but I am also always reminding this good lesson to myself.
This is my opinion towards our last question.
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I hope that you will enjoy my answer and have a wonderful weekend! ^^
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See you on Monday!
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