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2016-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! It is very humid here so I feel down even if today is a wonderful Friday. It is not raining but there will be rain in the afternoon. I am worried about my laundry that I have to do on weekend. According to the weather forecast, this rain will last until next Monday so this humid weather would hinder my laundry from being dried. In this situation, using newspaper and fan is a good way to make the laundry dried fast. This way is not as good as Mr.Sun helps us dry the laundry but it can be considered as a good alternative. ^^ By the way, when it comes to the last question in our book, I'd like to answer you below. As long as you can find something that you really like and want, you will get a good result someday. In this process, you might encounter difficulties and frustration but it could become precious memories in the future after achieving what you desired. I am unqualified to say this but I am also always reminding this good learn to myself. This is my opinion towards our last question. I hope that you will enjoy my answer and have a wonderful weekend! ^^ See you on Monday!

강사 첨삭

Very well said, [이름]!^^

All I can say is the advice was

very intelligible!

I hope you can share this thought to anybody.

Thanks for telling me!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 It is very humid here so I feel down even if today is a wonderful Friday. 

>> Correct
 It is not raining but there will be rain in the afternoon. 

>> Correct
 I am worried about my laundry that I have to do on weekend. 

>> Correct
 According to the weather forecast, this rain will last until next Monday so this humid weather would hinder my laundry from being dried. 

>> Correct [OMG!]
 In this situation, using newspaper and fan is a good way to make the laundry dried fast.

>> Correct
 This way is not as good as Mr.Sun helps us dry the laundry but it can be considered as a good alternative. ^^

>> This way is not as good as Mr. [Name] helping us dry the laundry but it can be considered as a good alternative. (I\'m doing this method, too!)
 By the way, when it comes to the last question in our book, I\'d like to answer you below. 

>> Correct
 As long as you can find something that you really like and want, you will get a good result someday. 

>> Correct
 In this process, you might encounter difficulties and frustration but it could become precious memories in the future after achieving what you desired. 

>>  In this process, you might encounter difficulties and frustration but they could become precious memories in the future after achieving what you desired. 
 I am unqualified to say this but I am also always reminding this good learn to myself.

>>  I am unqualified to say this but I am also always reminding this good lesson to myself.
 This is my opinion towards our last question. 

>> Correct
 I hope that you will enjoy my answer and have a wonderful weekend! ^^

>> Correct
 See you on Monday!

>> Correct

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