Composition

Hi, [이름]!^^

It is a good thing that we are studying this way.
We are more on free talking questions to enhance your speaking

skills. Keep up the good work in composition, too!^^

Let\'s talk more tomorrow!

Enjoy the rest of the day!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!
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We talked about Family Gathering and I am going to make some composition below. 

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 These are about the E part in our book. 

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 1. With you by my side, I can do everything. 

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 2. With his proper treatment, I can easily overcome my pain.

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 3. With our active cooperation, our plans will succeed.

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 4. With a team like this, we will win the first prize!

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 By the way, I am supersized with your sincere thought towards your family again. 

>>  By the way, I am surprised with your sincere thought towards your family again. 
 I really respect for you and your culture. 

>> I really respect you and your culture.
 Here in Korea, because of the poor economic situation, it is very hard for young generation to take a responsibility for their parents. 

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 I can definitely say that our young generation can\'t afford to care about their parents.

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 Even not asking parents to help young generation themselves is considered as a good deed.

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 How terrible it is! 

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 The most disappointed thing is that this tough society would not be changed easily without a social revolution.

>> The most disappointing thing is that this tough society would not be changed easily without social revolution.
 Just the thought of this makes me feel sad and down. 

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 That is all for today and see you!^^*

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