Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름] for sharing about the new trend.
In the Philippines, nowadays, young adults are becoming
more responsible in contrast to what you have now.
I hope that it will continue to help our society be more
independent.
See you again tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Here in Korea, it is raining heavily so our government even sent us an emergency message that please abstain from going out in this heavy rain.
>> Here in Korea, it is raining heavily so our government even sent us an emergency message saying \"Please abstain from going out during this heavy rain.\"
I am able to hear the rain falling indoors and the sound is really loud and clear.
>> Correct [That scares me!]
I hope this rain won\'t lead to any accidents.
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By the way, I\'d like to explain more about \'Kangaroo Tribe\' to you.
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People who depend on their parents either financially or emotionally are called \'Kangaroo Tribe\' and here in Korea, it is a new trend.
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They are afraid of going out of their parents\' care and they tend to lose confidence in making their lives on their own.
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This trend is considered as a big social problem but our government has not come up with a proper cure yet.
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If this situation lasted for a long time, we would be unable to expect for our bright future.
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We should have elected the President wisely.
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Suddenly, I brought up politics.
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See you tomorrow! ^^**
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P.S.: Thanks for saying that \'You deserve the new level.\'
>> Correct [You do!]
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