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Hello, [이름]!
Thank goodness you are safe

and so is your family.

I hope that these events wouldn\'t be so serious.

Any place is dangerous and I know these things

are inevitable. Just stay safe and

we should always be ready in any case.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 There are various natural phenomenons here in our country.

>>  There are various natural phenomena here in our country. 

The rain is pouring constantly in the midlands for three days. 

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 On the other hand, it is very sunny and hot in the southern area. 

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 Moreover, they who live in the southern area felt an earthquake yesterday. 

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 According to the observation center, its magnitude was 5.

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 I called my sister and friend this morning to check if there was no damage.

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 They said that many people were able to feel a tremor and things were dropped down from a high place. 

>>  They said that many people were able to feel a tremor and things dropped down from a high place. 

 It was a very uncommon situation for Koreans so we are unable to feel secure about this earthquake any more. 

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 What scares us the most is the structures of nuclear facilities. 

>> What scares us the most are the structures of nuclear facilities. 
 The main facilities are concentrated in the southern area and it is near Japan. 

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 As long as an earthquake happens seriously again, we can\'t be sure of the safety of the facilities. 

>> If an earthquake happens seriously again, we can\'t be sure of the safety of the facilities. 
 Our country has been relatively considered as a secure area from major earthquakes until now but we have to start worrying that we are no longer safe from earthquakes with some earthquakes that already happened in recent years. 

>> Our country has been relatively considered as a secure area from major earthquakes until now but we have to start worrying that we are no longer safe from earthquakes because of some earthquakes that already happened in recent years. 
 Just the thought of this situation happening again makes me feel sacred. 

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 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

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