Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
In my case, my skin condition used to be ok but
now, it\'s like monster\'s skin. I also don\'t know how to
bring it back to normal but I think, as long as I am here in
Baguio City, it will never go away.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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It has stopped raining here but it is still humid.
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Because of this high humid and temperature, I am having a lot of pimples on my face.
>> Because of this high humidity and temperature, I am having a lot of pimples on my face.
I suffer from this symptom in every summer season so summer is what I hate the most among four seasons.
>> I suffer from this symptom every summer season so summer is what I hate the most among four seasons.
My friends push me to have a skin exam at a dermatologist, but I am somehow unable to trust the remedy that dermatologists usually give.
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They usually prescribe an ointment with steroid and some pills which soothe infection.
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This prescription seems to work on my symptom only for a while and as soon as I stop taking and applying, I start having my pimples again.
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I think I need to cure my skin radically but I don\'t know how to manage it.
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Many people say that aloes are helpful for pimples so I am going to try it.
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I used to have a good skin condition a few years ago but I have no idea why I suddenly have oily and sensitive skin.
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Whenever I look into a mirror, I get stressful. ㅜㅜ
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I hope this summer would fly so fast.^^;;
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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