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2016-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! It has stopped raining here but it is still humid. Because of this high humid and temperature, I am having a lot of pimples on my face. I suffer from this symptom in every summer season so summer is what I hate the most among four seasons. My friends push me to have a skin exam at a dermatologist, but I am somehow unable to trust the remedy that dermatologists usually give. They usually prescribe an ointment with steroid and some pills which soothe infection. This prescription seems to work on my symptom only for a while and as soon as I stop taking and applying, I start having my pimples again. I think I need to cure my skin radically but I don't know how to manage it. Many people say that aloes are helpful for pimples so I am going to try it. I used to have a good skin condition a few years ago but I have no idea why I suddenly have oily and sensitive skin. Whenever I look into a mirror, I get stressful. ㅜㅜ I hope this summer would fly so fast.^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

In my case, my skin condition used to be ok but

now, it\'s like monster\'s skin. I also don\'t know how to

bring it back to normal but I think, as long as I am here in

Baguio City, it will never go away.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 It has stopped raining here but it is still humid. 

>> Correct
 Because of this high humid and temperature, I am having a lot of pimples on my face. 

>> Because of this high humidity and temperature, I am having a lot of pimples on my face. 
 I suffer from this symptom in every summer season so summer is what I hate the most among four seasons. 

>> I suffer from this symptom every summer season so summer is what I hate the most among four seasons. 

 My friends push me to have a skin exam at a dermatologist, but I am somehow unable to trust the remedy that dermatologists usually give.

>> Correct
 They usually prescribe an ointment with steroid and some pills which soothe infection. 

>> Correct
 This prescription seems to work on my symptom only for a while and as soon as I stop taking and applying, I start having my pimples again. 

>> Correct
 I think I need to cure my skin radically but I don\'t know how to manage it. 

>> Correct
 Many people say that aloes are helpful for pimples so I am going to try it. 

>> Correct
 I used to have a good skin condition a few years ago but I have no idea why I suddenly have oily and sensitive skin. 

>> Correct
 Whenever I look into a mirror, I get stressful. ㅜㅜ

>> Correct
I hope this summer would fly so fast.^^;;

>> Correct
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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