Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing what you had though
it is somewhat a not a good idea. I hope your boss will be able
to find a solution for that.
Anyhow, just enjoy what you have there for now.
And don\'t let that idea ruin your weekend.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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The rain has stopped and I am able to see Mr.Sun now.
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It\'s been a long time since we last saw it.
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Somehow, I feel pleasant with just being able to see it.
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It seems like the weather condition really affects people\'s feelings.
>> Correct [I totally agree. I feel so gloomy now.]
By the way, our boss is on the way to go to LG now so he won\'t be in the office today.
>> Correct [Yahoo!]
Just this fact makes me feel happier. ^^
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However, at this moment, I can\'t totally feel happy and comfortable.
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The reason why he has to visit LG is that we need to deal with a headache task.
>> The reason why he has to visit LG is that we need to deal with pain in the neck task.
What we are facing is not a trivial thing and it is really related with our future business.
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We don\'t want to lose our business item so our boss is struggling to come up with a solution.
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I am also expecting for the good result from this visit.
>> I am also expecting for a good result from this visit.
Anyway, since my boss is not in the office, I am just going to enjoy this time just for today.
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I hope you will also have the same feeling with me.
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Have a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^**
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