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2016-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! The rain has stopped and I am able to see Mr.Sun now. It's been a long time since we last saw it. Somehow, I feel pleasant with just being able to see it. It seems like the weather condition really affects people's feelings. By the way, our boss is on the way to go to LG now so he won't be in the office today. Just this fact makes me feel happier. ^^ However, at this moment, I can't totally feel happy and comfortable. The reason why he has to visit LG is that we need to deal with a headache task. What we are facing is not a trivial thing and it is really related with our future business. We don't want to lose our business item so our boss is struggling to come up with a solution. I am also expecting for the good result from this visit. Anyway, since my boss is not in the office, I am just going to enjoy this time just for today. I hope you will also have the same feeling with me. Have a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing what you had though

it is somewhat a not a good idea. I hope your boss will be able

to find a solution for that.

Anyhow, just enjoy what you have there for now.

And don\'t let that idea ruin your weekend.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 The rain has stopped and I am able to see Mr.Sun now. 

>> Correct
 It\'s been a long time since we last saw it.

>> Correct
 Somehow, I feel pleasant with just being able to see it. 

>> Correct
 It seems like the weather condition really affects people\'s feelings. 

>> Correct [I totally agree. I feel so gloomy now.]
 By the way, our boss is on the way to go to LG now so he won\'t be in the office today. 

>> Correct [Yahoo!]
 Just this fact makes me feel happier. ^^

>> Correct
 However, at this moment, I can\'t totally feel happy and comfortable. 

>> Correct
 The reason why he has to visit LG is that we need to deal with a headache task. 

>> The reason why he has to visit LG is that we need to deal with pain in the neck task.
What we are facing is not a trivial thing and it is really related with our future business.

 >> Correct
We don\'t want to lose our business item so our boss is struggling to come up with a solution. 

>> Correct
 I am also expecting for the good result from this visit. 

>>  I am also expecting for a good result from this visit. 
 Anyway, since my boss is not in the office, I am just going to enjoy this time just for today.

>> Correct
 I hope you will also have the same feeling with me. 

>> Correct
 Have a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^**

>> Correct

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