Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
With your saying today, I am encouraged to keep on studying English again.
I am the one who gets affected by my daily condition so sometimes, it makes me feel hard to speak English.
Whenever this situation happens, I used to be disappointed with myself.
Well, overcoming a slump really depends on my effort.
I need to reflect on myself if I study it diligently. ^^;;
Anyway, I tried to complete the fill-in-the-blanks in our book.
1. I can't believe he's already a president at such a young age! On a second thought, it makes sense since I know how diligent he is.
2. I don't think he will come. On a second thought, seeing that he loves the menu we have, he might just come for the food.
4. I feel like having salad. On a second thought, I feel like having beef.
When it comes to No 3, I finished making my composition but it seems like the meaning of this sentence is a contradiction.
3. Learning another language may be nothing but difficult. On a second thought, it might be time consuming as well.
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
P.S.: Your encouragement always gives me a lot of confidence.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!I have always told you that I will be here
not only to teach you but
to encourage you also when it comes to
studying English.
Without confidence, remember, you will be able to
succeed in using the language.
See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectWith your saying today, I am encouraged to keep on studying English again.
>> CorrectI am the one who gets affected by my daily condition so sometimes, it makes me feel hard to speak English.
>> CorrectWhenever this situation happens, I used to be disappointed with myself.
>> CorrectWell, overcoming a slump really depends on my effort.
>> CorrectI need to reflect on myself if I study it diligently. ^^;;
>> CorrectAnyway, I tried to complete the fill-in-the-blanks in our book.
>> Correct1. I can\'t believe he\'s already a president at such a young age! On a second thought, it makes sense since I know how diligent he is.
>> Correct2. I don\'t think he will come. On a second thought, seeing that he loves the menu we have, he might just come for the food.
>> Correct4. I feel like having salad. On a second thought, I feel like having beef.
>> CorrectWhen it comes to No 3, I finished making my composition but it seems like the meaning of this sentence is a contradiction.
>> Correct3. Learning another language may be nothing but difficult. On a second thought, it might be time consuming as well.
>> Learning another language may be nothing but difficult. On a second thought, it might be fun as well.That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
>> CorrectP.S.: Your encouragement always gives me a lot of confidence.
>> Correct
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