Composition

2016-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! It is sad to know that drinking coffee doesn't work on you at all. I think sleeping tightly is the best way for you to get rid of your tiredness. By the way, you sent me some pictures about instant coffee that your manager bought from Korea. Definitely, it contained sugar. I'd like to recommend you to have instant black coffee called KANU. It doesn't contain any sugar and cream and it looks like MAXIM coffee's coffee grains. These two products are made by the same company so the taste would be similar if you get rid of sugar and cream from MAXIM. Even if the KANU is not chip in comparison to the MAXIM, it deserves to pay. Since we can't live without coffee, we should consider the best way to save money when it comes to buying coffee. Now, I am having a cup of iced coffee and it makes me feel relaxed and pleasant. That is why I can't skip drinking it everyday. It seems like I am a coffee addict. Hehehe! That is all for today and see you tomorrow!^^*

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!^^

While reading your message, I was thinking of drinking coffee!^^

I really imagined the situation you were at while writing your composition

and I really envied you. kkk

Make sure you have a healthy stomach for you not to have bad reactions

from coffee in the future.

See you then!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 It is sad to know that drinking coffee doesn\'t work on you at all.

>> >> Correct
 I think sleeping tightly is the best way for you to get rid of your tiredness. 

>> Correct
By the way, you sent me some pictures about instant coffee that your manager bought from Korea. 

>> Correct
 Definitely, it contained sugar. 

>> Correct [OMG!]
 I\'d like to recommend you to have instant black coffee called KANU. 

>> Correct
 It doesn\'t contain any sugar and cream and it looks like MAXIM coffee\'s coffee grains.

>> Correct [I already remember. But they are too small which means little amount of coffee too, right?]
 These two products are made by the same company so the taste would be similar if you get rid of sugar and cream from MAXIM. 

>> Correct
 Even if the KANU is not chip in comparison to the MAXIM, it deserves to pay. 

>> Even if the KANU is not cheap in comparison to MAXIM, it deserves the price. [Did I understand the thought you want to say?] 
 Since we can\'t live without coffee, we should consider the best way to save money when it comes to buying coffee. 

>> Correct
 Now, I am having a cup of iced coffee and it makes me feel relaxed and pleasant. 

>> Correct [Can I have some? kkk]
 That is why I can\'t skip drinking it everyday. 

>> Correct
 It seems like I am a coffee addict. Hehehe!

>> Correct
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow!^^*

>> Correct

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