Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!^^
While reading your message, I was thinking of drinking coffee!^^
I really imagined the situation you were at while writing your composition
and I really envied you. kkk
Make sure you have a healthy stomach for you not to have bad reactions
from coffee in the future.
See you then!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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It is sad to know that drinking coffee doesn\'t work on you at all.
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I think sleeping tightly is the best way for you to get rid of your tiredness.
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By the way, you sent me some pictures about instant coffee that your manager bought from Korea.
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Definitely, it contained sugar.
>> Correct [OMG!]
I\'d like to recommend you to have instant black coffee called KANU.
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It doesn\'t contain any sugar and cream and it looks like MAXIM coffee\'s coffee grains.
>> Correct [I already remember. But they are too small which means little amount of coffee too, right?]
These two products are made by the same company so the taste would be similar if you get rid of sugar and cream from MAXIM.
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Even if the KANU is not chip in comparison to the MAXIM, it deserves to pay.
>> Even if the KANU is not cheap in comparison to MAXIM, it deserves the price. [Did I understand the thought you want to say?]
Since we can\'t live without coffee, we should consider the best way to save money when it comes to buying coffee.
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Now, I am having a cup of iced coffee and it makes me feel relaxed and pleasant.
>> Correct [Can I have some? kkk]
That is why I can\'t skip drinking it everyday.
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It seems like I am a coffee addict. Hehehe!
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow!^^*
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