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2016-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Today, our boss is on the way to go to LG in Changwon city. What a great day! Hahaha! Even if I have a lot of reports to translate, I feel comfortable and free because of his absence. I hope I can have this kind of good luck many times. Hehehe! By the way, actually, I was unable to understand the meaning of the sentence of Activity No.2 in our book. However, you suddenly put this question backward so I can have time to ask you to explain the meaning of that. Please make it clear so that I can prepare for my answer in advance. ^^ Regarding the question No.3, when someone hands me my change, I always count it one by one. Maybe, it is because I am the person who doesn't want to make a loss. Sometimes, I feel tired because of this trait and I somehow have obsession with something. I need to control myself in order not to bother myself because of unproductive things. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름].

Actually, question number 2 has always been confusing

for all, not only students but for teachers, too.

However, let me paraphrase the question for better understanding.

Do you know a person you didn\'t pay much attention to but

suddenly surprised you?

I think this is the best I\'ve got regarding question number 2.

If it\'s not yet clear, let me just explain it further tomorrow.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Today, our boss is on the way to go to LG in Changwon city.

>> Today, our boss is on his way to LG in Changwon city.
 What a great day! Hahaha!

>> Correct [Let\'s party!kkkk]
 Even if I have a lot of reports to translate, I feel comfortable and free because of his absence. 

>> Correct 
 I hope I can have this kind of good luck many times. Hehehe! 

>> Correct 
By the way, actually, I was unable to understand the meaning of the sentence of Activity No.2 in our book. 

>> Correct 
 However, you suddenly put this question backward so I can have time to ask you to explain the meaning of that. 

>> Correct 
 Please make it clear so that I can prepare for my answer in advance. ^^

>> Correct 
 Regarding the question No.3, when someone hands me my change, I always count it one by one. 

>> Correct 
 Maybe, it is because I am the person who doesn\'t want to make a loss. 

>>  Maybe, it is because I am a person who doesn\'t want to make a loss. 
 Sometimes, I feel tired because of this trait and I somehow have obsession with something. 

>> Correct 
 I need to control myself in order not to bother myself because of unproductive things.

>> Correct 
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct 

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