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2016-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! These days, I haven't slept well because of the cicadas’noise. When I sleep, I usually open the windows because of the heat so I can hear the noise very clear. There are a few trees in front of my house and It seems like a lot of cicadas live there. I have thought of the reason why they still cry at night. Maybe, it is because of the streetlight and the high temperature by global warming. Indeed, it is really noise pollution so I am so irritated with this situation. I know I can't blame those cicadas which are innocent. It is all cased by human beings so I can't help but blame myself. Well, I am going to buy ear plugs and eye patches. By the way, I am curious about the sentences below. -I will feel pleasant. -> I know it is correct one. -I will be pleasant .-> Is it a wrong expression? You corrected it into 'be pleased' so I am confused about this usage. I am waiting for your clear explanation. Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
The explanation is at the bottom part.

However, if it still needs clarification, I will be dealing with them

on Monday so that I can explain it further.

Have a happy weekend!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 These days, I haven\'t slept well because of the cicadas’noise.

>> Correct
 When I sleep, I usually open the windows because of the heat so I can hear the noise very clear. 

>>  When I sleep, I usually open the windows because of the heat so I can hear the noise very clearly. 
 There are a few trees in front of my house and It seems like a lot of cicadas live there. 

>> Correct
 I have thought of the reason why they still cry at night.

>> Correct
 Maybe, it is because of the streetlight and the high temperature by global warming. 

>> Correct
 Indeed, it is really noise pollution so I am so irritated with this situation. 

>> Correct
 I know I can\'t blame those cicadas which are innocent. 

>> Correct 
It is all cased by human beings so I can\'t help but blame myself.

>> Correct
 Well, I am going to buy ear plugs and eye patches. 

>> Correct
 By the way, I am curious about the sentences below. 

>> Correct 
-I will feel pleasant. -> I know it is correct one. 

>> Correct [This is for your own feeling.]
 -I will be pleasant .-> Is it a wrong expression? You corrected it into \'be pleased\' so I am confused about this usage. 

>> Correct [You will be socially acceptable or adept; polite. The meaning may differ.^^]
 I am waiting for your clear explanation. 

>> Correct
 Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

>> Correct

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