Composition

2016-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! As an extension of our class, when it comes to the bad smell of cloths, it is caused by bacteria that harbor well in this humid weather. To remove this bad smell, we should first kill the bacteria totally but it is impossible for us to deal with it perfectly. The best way that we can do is to boil the laundry but as what you said, it is inconvenient for us. As an alternative, we can use vinegar, newspapers and fans to kill the bacteria and dry our laundry quickly. When you rinse your laundry, you should put some vinegar for the last rinse and squeeze the clothes well. In this situation, you should remove water from your laundry as much as possible. If the water remains a lot, it will make a good condition for bacteria to live. In this case, no matter how much vinegar we use, it is useless. For your reference, vinegar has a function of disinfection so it is used for doing laundry and cleaning houses as well. Moreover, you can see people adding some lemons when they eat sliced raw fish in order to prevent them from getting food poisoning. As you know, lemons and vinegar have acidic components so we can understand this logic in the same vein. It was my little knowledge and you can try it as well. For your reference, you can only put a small glass of vinegar like 30 ml~40 ml in your case. I wanted to correct what I said in our class. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

[이름],

Very useful composition indeed!^^
I really like it!^^

kkk

I will try my best to follow your instructions.

And then, I will tell you whether I am successful or not.

However, maybe not today because I have an appointment.kkk

See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
As an extension of our class, when it comes to the bad smell of cloths, it is caused by bacteria that harbor well in this humid weather.

>> As an extension of our class, when it comes to the bad smell of clothes, it is caused by bacteria that harbor well in this humid weather.
To remove this bad smell, we should first kill the bacteria totally but it is impossible for us to deal with it perfectly.

>> Correct
The best way that we can do is to boil the laundry but as what you said, it is inconvenient for us.

>> Correct
As an alternative, we can use vinegar, newspapers and fans to kill the bacteria and dry our laundry quickly.

>> Correct
When you rinse your laundry, you should put some vinegar for the last rinse and squeeze the clothes well.

>> Correct
In this situation, you should remove water from your laundry as much as possible.

>> Correct
If the water remains a lot, it will make a good condition for bacteria to live.

>> If a lot of water remains, it will make a good condition for bacteria to live.
In this case, no matter how much vinegar we use, it is useless.

>> Correct
For your reference, vinegar has a function of disinfection so it is used for doing laundry and cleaning houses as well.

>> Correct
Moreover, you can see people adding some lemons when they eat sliced raw fish in order to prevent them from getting food poisoning.

>> Correct
As you know, lemons and vinegar have acidic components so we can understand this logic in the same vein.

>> Correct
It was my little knowledge and you can try it as well.

>> Correct
For your reference, you can only put a small glass of vinegar like 30 ml~40 ml in your case.

>> Correct
I wanted to correct what I said in our class.

>> Correct
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct

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