Composition

2016-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I'd like to make my composition using 'To some' below. 1. To many people, family means a lot to them. They even consider their family as everything to them. 2. To some, it is important to study English very hard for their success. 3. To women who work late, it is recommended that they make time to work out regularly. 4. For women, it can be dangerous to smoke and drink alcohol. By the way, yesterday, I met a friend who used to be my predecessor 10 years ago. She lives in Incheon City where is far away from my place so it was very hard for both of us to meet very often. However, she has started to work in Seoul so we were able to make an appointment to meet each other. It has been a long time since we last met each other so we felt very pleasant. I like her personality and, so does she, so we were unable to notice how quickly time flied. Indeed, meeting old friends seems like a kind of emotional healing. That is all for today and see you tomorrow!^^**

강사 첨삭

Good morning, my dear [이름].

Thank you for answering the sentences ahead of time.

Regarding the correction about the word pleasant,

I would like you to check this website http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/pleasant
to read an explanation more about the word pleasant.^^

Don\'t be confused with the word \"pleased\".

See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 I\'d like to make my composition using \'To some\' below. 

>> Correct
 1. To many people, family means a lot to them. They even consider their family as everything to them.

>> Correct
 2. To some, it is important to study English very hard for their success.

>> Correct
 3. To women who work late, it is recommended that they make time to work out regularly.

>> Correct
 4. For women, it can be dangerous to smoke and drink alcohol. 

>> Correct
 By the way, yesterday, I met a friend who used to be my predecessor 10 years ago. 

>> Correct
 She lives in Incheon City where is far away from my place so it was very hard for both of us to meet very often. 

>>  She lives in Incheon City which is far away from my place so it was very hard for both of us to meet very often. 
 However, she has started to work in Seoul so we were able to make an appointment to meet each other.

>> Correct 
It has been a long time since we last met each other so we felt very pleasant.

>> It has been a long time since we last met each other so we felt very pleased.
 I like her personality and, so does she, so we were unable to notice how quickly time flied. 

>> Correct 
Indeed, meeting old friends seems like a kind of emotional healing.

>> Correct
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow!^^**

>> Correct

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